Sunday, April 24, 2016

The Story of a Dragon Slayer Boy

Hello guys, i want to share the first part of my narrative story . Hope you guys enjoy reading my story.~

The Story of a Dragon Slayer Boy
          Once upon a time, in a nation called Legendia. A young and energic boy named Xin lived together with a priest called Teramai. He loved helping and caring others but sadly he didn’t  have many friends. The one who cared about him was Teramai himself.
            Xin lived in a town on south part of legendia called Fairy Town, many people who live there were merchants and soldiers. One day in the afternoon, when Xin traveled around to find wood in the shadow forest which located near Fairy Town, He found himself isolated by a group of barbarian who tried to steal his money. He didn’t bring any weapon to defend himself, but suddenly.., An arrow came out of nowhere and hit one of the barbarian and it was an arrow of an archranger named Lire, who knew around the village as a sharpshooter. In a blink of an eye, all of the barbarian escaped and Xin could survive their attack. Trying to be polite and thankful, Xin expressed his appreciation to Lire, but she only responded it with a cold smile.
            The next day, Fairy Town Mayor, Harold told the whole villagers that Fairy Town will be attacked by a heresy and misleading group called The Dragon Followers. The whole town panicked and tried to save their own life by migrating to the north town called Mana Ridge. They believed people in Mana Ridge would be able to help them, because most of them are priests and magicians.
            Xin, with his own bravery. Stood on his own feet , defending the whole town and said : “ Don’t panic , I got this!”, but nobody noticed him as the whole town keep running away from Fairy town. Before his parents died, Xin’s father , Gerraint trained him to be a swordmaster , but his father always said : “ Use your weapon wisely and be ready in all times”. Xin recalled this and what Mayor Harold told was true, the dragon followers arrived as soon as the night fell.
            Xin wasn’t alone, Lire who’s an elf came from the shadow forest and helped him again, but this time it was more difficult as they faced not only a group of dragon follower, but the dragon itself !.  They fought but unfortunately both of them reached their limit and they weren’t able to defeat the invaders.
            On their retreat, a paladin and a magician from Mana Ridge came to them and introduced themselves as the reinforcement from the north. The Paladin name was Jake, and the magician name was Angelica, they offered Xin and Lire to go back  to Fairy Town, but it was too late because Fairy Town had been demolished by the dragon followers and they had no choice but to escape.
           
The dragon who had been summoned by the dragon followers didn’t let them go easily, It flew around and found the fourth adventurers on Foothills of Black Mountain. It blocked their escape route , and in the end , They could not escape and decided to fight that Dragon!.

Xin who’s in the front line attacked the dragon furiously with his father’s legendary sword, but it’s only like a toothpick for the dragon. Lire with her Eaglesong bow, also attacked the dragon with her agility , and her aim was never miss, it hit the dragon eyes!. Angelica with her Elemental mastery, use her staff to summon a fire and ice storm but on her way to summon the storm, the dragon's breath made her turned into stone. The Paladin, Jake with his faith and bible, prayed and dispelled the petrifying dragon’s breath from Angelica. The fourth adventurers agreed to attacked the dragon together on its head and it was right! The Mighty Dragon fell after a single blow on the head by the fourth adventurer. As a group of adventurers who didn't know each others, they had saved the day and also the town. The Dragon followers also nowhere to be found after that attack and their existence was no more. Xin and his group rebuilt the Fairy Town and they lived with peace without worrying about the misleading group, dragon followers.

2 comments:

  1. Awesome! Your are very imaginative and your grammar is good too.
    But I think the plot is too fast. Maybe you can add some more detail in their battle. thank u :)

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  2. I like your story about the dragon hunter.
    But, I think you should tell other who is Gerraint and your final paragraph is like the end of the story. Thanks :)

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